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©2009-2010 =AshHavynn
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EDIT: FUCK I FORGOT HER FRECKLES.

Sometimes, the best thing to do after getting fucked up in a fistfight is just go home and sit half naked in your favorite chair listening to your iPod.

Savannah Phoenix (c) :iconashhavynn:

Mediums: Copics, Blending chalk, Prismacolors, Watercolors, Chalk, Metallic marker, Oil pastel.

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:iconraptorrex:
I like the idea, it made me laugh. Being fucked up in a fist fight fives times per week is quite a funny concept. : P

The colouring is superb, I really marvel at how you make it so smooth. It's awesome.

I love the form of the character, i like her pose and i love the different types of material, eg her fur, hair, jumper. I felt that the folds in the jumper were really well done and i makes it look thick and cosy. Loads of fluffy hair too, which is sumptuous.

The background is really fun too, notes express how she's calming to the music as they take on a linear and water-like wave.

The simple things you do also make this dev the best it can be. I like the shading on the floor, how you've done the little cirlces and the outline around the chair. :) Brilliant.

One thing that i'd suggest improvement on is the chair. It's tilted a little bit to the left and it hasn't got as much depth and presence as Savannah. Obviously she's the main focus, but you don't want paper doll syndrome - which i know you won't get because your deviations usually have a great feel of integration with the foreground and background. :)

I hope this helped, Ash, you're developing in leaps and bounds.
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:icondjkid:
Hey man, that's what I'd do.

The coloring's so nice and smooth ♥

Can you not just add the freckles with a pen?

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:iconashhavynn:
XD It would be extremely easy, but I just can't be bothered to work on it anymore.

Thank you =D I blame the 26 types of media on making it look that good.

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:icondjkid:
Maybe one of these days I'll be cool like you and do more than stare at my markers. :D

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:iconashhavynn:
I only do it because my tablet isn't worth a shit =D

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:iconpikanyaa-san:
I'd probably plop down with an iced tea and play some Spyro the Dragon. *shot*

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:iconashhavynn:
Man, I'd be takin some painkillers, getting some bandages, eating some icecream....

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:iconanubiswolfie:
This is amazinggg
Shading as usual is WOW

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:iconashhavynn:
Thank you! =D
I like that all the people I actually use to enjoy talking to at PWO are here on DA.
It saves me the trouble of visiting that hell-hole. And I don't have to stomach the drama. =)

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:iconanubiswolfie:
Haha, yeah. I can't help but visit PWO, it's just.. my home. But I can understand why you wouldn't wanna visit.. Drama here, drama there... DRAMASPLOSION.

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